Are you considering traveling? Let me tell you there are many requirements and rules in order to keep people safe. I am Dylan Ramirez and I have traveled with family out of the United States.
My audience is people who want to travel out of the states
I will inform people on the dangers of traveling, so my letter will be informative
My title: Dangers of traveling outside the states
Personal narative- My experience traveling to puerto rico
current issue- omicron varrient https://www.cnbc.com/2021/11/29/biden-says-he-doesnt-expect-more-travel-restrictions-or-lockdowns-as-omicron-covid-variant-spreads.html
solution- I believe a solution to this would be to refrain from traveling until there is a way to defend the body against this new variant of corona virus.
You have not written enough for this intro or lead. IN fact, it’s only 2 or 3 sentences. That is not enough. Study the examples.
Please read through the ENTIRE “How to Write A Letter” walk-through which I provided in Announcements. It’s also in the Unit 3 Assignment under Option to Write A Letter. I think you did not scroll through the entire document.
We noted these parts of the letter:
INTRO part
• Salutation to your AUDIENCE
• Identify yourself and how you connect to the issue
• Give your message, your PURPOSE.
• Explain why your message is important.
BODY part
• Engage the reader with storytelling. Use personal narrative (we learned this in Unit One).
• Explain the problem, the crisis, the current issue.
• Give evidence. Refer to your research (but do not copy your research verbatim into your letter). Facts, statistics, historical events.
• Show that you are an expert, that you have the authority to speak on this issue.
• Use visuals to accompany your points here in the body.
• Argue, persuade, convince or inform
CONCLUSION part
• Provide a solution,
• a call to action, or
• a manifesto.
• Refer back to the message in a clever way (remember Annie Correal ciricled back to the photo album)
• Repeat your message in a new clever way