Final Revision Ideas — Lisa

Revision on Education Narrative

After studying Prof. Wu’s comments on my essay, I plan to develop two more scenes at key points in my story, in P. 4 and P. 6.  I plan to break up large blocks of dialogue.


Revision on RAB

After studying Prof. Wu’s comments, I plan to improve my summary writing for Source Entry 1 and 2. I will also revise my reflection parts to include more of my own original thinking and my opinions on the source article or video. I see now that I did a lot of summarizing in the reflection and that wasn’t correct. I will reorganize the entire RAB so the presentation is structured. I will label all parts of the RAB clearly.

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