After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my Narrative Essay, I plan to work on developing more scenes for some of my key points. Like where I mentioned how I’ve molded some of the values my parents tried to instill into me into a better version of what they used to be. I also want to add one or two more scenes to better help convey my message easier for whoever is reading it. And if I need any help with proofreading or correcting any inconsistencies in my writing, I can always schedule an appointment with a tutor or even speak with Prof. Wu if she has the time. To be honest, though, I’m okay with the grade I have for this assignment, but it never hurts to try and see if I can do better.
