RAB Source Entry 1 – Gentian Dumani (UPDATED)

Mervosh, Sarah. “The Pandemic Hurt These Students the Most.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 28 July 2021, https://www.nytimes.com/2021/07/28/us/covid-schools-at-home-learning-study.html

Main Idea: Students in the USA are facing learning set backs due to the COVID-19 pandemic.

Supporting Detail 1:

“About 5.5 million
public school
students in third
through eighth grade
who took the NWEA’s
tests during the school
year, and compared
their performance
similar to students in
2019. The percentiles
in the report ranked
student achievement
for both groups against
national norms before
the pandemic. Perhaps
even more troubling,
the students who were
most affected by the
crisis were already
behind their peers
before the pandemic,
and the added loses
have pushed them
further back.”
Supporting Detail 2:

“By the end of the
school year, students
were, on average,
four to five months
behind where
students have been
typically in the past
according to the
report by McKinsey,
which found similar
impacts on the most
vunerable students.”
Supporting Detail 3:

“The report analyzed
the results from more
than 1.6 million
elementary school
students who took
assessments this
spring and compared
the results with
demographically
similar groups in
the spring of 2017,
2018 and 2019…..
The disparities quite
likely reflect a number
of factors. Low-income
communities and
communities of color
tended to have less
access to technology,
and they experienced
disproportionate rates
of Covid-19 and higher
unemployment. The
McKinsey report also
found that students at
more urban schools faced
greater setbacks than
at rural schools, which
generally were more
likely to go back to
school in person.”

Part 2 Summary:

In “The Pandemic Hurt These Students The Most” Sarah Mershov reports that public school students ranging from kindergarten to highschool have been dramatically falling behind in classes because of the pandemic. The NWEA, an association responsible for administering tests for students in grades k-12 compared the results from exams taken in the 2020-2021 school year to the 2019 school year. They found out that third graders who attended a low income school tested 17 percentile points lower in math in 2020 compared to similar students in 2019. According to a report by the McKinsey company, students were four to five months behind where they should have been in the past and students who attended schools that were majority black or hispanic would be six months behind compared to white students. In addition, Emma Dorn an associate partner at the McKinsey company analyzed the results of 1.6 million elementary school students who took exams and revealed that low income communities and communities of color have less access to technology, and often have a harder time dealing with covid-19.

Part 3A Reflection:

I chose this article by Sarah Mershov because she thoroughly explains how  Covid 19 has affected the classrooms around America. I myself have experienced many learning deficits throughout remote learning to a point where I was attending class everyday and learning absolutely nothing. She states the people who are affected by learning loss the greatest are people who live in communities of color because those areas have less access to technology. My question to Mershov is what kind of technology do these students not have access to? I personally have access to technology and still did not perform well during online school. I feel like she should have added an extra section in her article explaining why the lack of technology is a contributing factor to learning loss. I agree when she begins to say “Frequent, intensive tutoring — one-on-one or in small groups, multiple times a week — is one of the most effective ways to help students make up for academic gaps.” This is a way to tackle the effects of learning loss. However, it’s just not physically possible. Schools would need a ridiculous amount of money and teachers to make this possible.

Part 3b Rhetorical analysis:

Mershov’s audience is everyone. Her purpose is to inform and to bring awareness to the fact that students are losing out on education. The tone of this article is objective. Sarah Mershov is a reporter for the New York Times and has written multiple articles covering prek-12 education. It’s a reliable source because the NYT has a worldwide audience and is operated by many award winning writers.

Part 4 Notable quotables:

“The findings paint an alarming picture of an education system plagued by racial and socioeconomic inequities that have only gotten worse during the coronavirus pandemic. An educational gap became a gulf.” (Sarah Mershov)

“The losses did not just happen early on. In one surprising finding, NWEA researchers found that students made some gains in the fall, but that the pace of learning stalled more significantly from winter to spring, even after many schools had returned in person” (Sarah Mershov)


“The problem with the learning loss narrative is it is premised on a set of racialized assumptions and focused on test scores.” (Ann Ishimaru)

1 thought on “RAB Source Entry 1 – Gentian Dumani (UPDATED)”

  1. YOu are on the right track!

    Where is your Reflection parts? Two paragraphs in the reflection — the second [part 3B should be analysis of the efectiveness of the writing….Look at the assignment! author source credibilty? Tone? audience? Purpose???

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