Final Revision Ideas Education Narrative — Lisa

Revision on Education Narrative

After studying Prof. Wu’s comments on my essay, I plan to develop two more scenes at key points in my story, in P. 4 and P. 6.  I plan to break up large blocks of dialogue by adding descriptive phrases.  I’ll experiment with starting my story at a more dramatic point and weaving some of the original material into the body of the story. I’ll meet with a tutor at the Writing Center to study complex sentence (could be everybody here!)  I’ll read the extended scene with dialogue on page 2 for our Final Day Celebration, May 23.

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