two positives, two negatives

Hebah Kharoufeh

English 1121


Assignment: peer review


Two positives: 1. My partners, Najja’s essay is very informative with a lot of details.

  1. Najja uses a story telling form that makes her essay interesting.


Two negatives 1. She uses (he) a lot. I think she should repeat the name a couple of times.

  1. Najja didn’t write about all three sub topics.