Hebah Kharoufeh

English 1121

3/7/2016

Assignment: peer review

Two positives: 1. My partners, Najja’s essay is very informative with a lot of details.

2. Najja uses a story telling form that makes her essay interesting.

Two negatives 1. She uses (he) a lot. I think she should repeat the name a couple of times.

2. Najja didn’t write about all three sub topics.