Hebah Kharoufeh

English 1121

3/28/16

Assignment peer review second essay

1. Yes Kayla started with a quote
2. She has a clear thesis and three subtopics
3. Subtopic paragraphs are also divided into sub subtopics
4. She doesn’t use many quotes from the poem in her essay
5. Not many transitional words
6. Some grammar mistakes
7. She has a conclusion but doesn’t restate her thesis