Assignment peer review research essay
- Opener: Farzana added an opener to her essay using a quote from Susan Anthony
- Thesis and subtopics: in the recent years Bangladesh has been coming forth on acknowledging these problems and a quiet revolution is stirring up. Some examples of these issues are, crimes against women, education of women, and the empowerment of women.
- Farzana has included three subtopic paragraphs
- She has used some transitional words
- She has used quotes with proper citations
- No grammar errors
- Farzana has included a conclusion and restated her thesis.