Hebah Kharoufeh

English 1121

5/18/2016

Assignment peer review research essay

1. Opener: Farzana added an opener to her essay using a quote from Susan Anthony
2. Thesis and subtopics: in the recent years Bangladesh has been coming forth on acknowledging these problems and a quiet revolution is stirring up. Some examples of these issues are, crimes against women, education of women, and the empowerment of women.
3. Farzana has included three subtopic paragraphs
4. She has used some transitional words
5. She has used quotes with proper citations
6. No grammar errors
7. Farzana has included a conclusion and restated her thesis.