English Composition II

Author: Johana (Page 6 of 6)

Rough Draft

ā€œThe best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others.ā€Ā 

Mahatma Gandhi

This unique phrase has stuck with me throughout my college experience, especially as a human service major. When I graduated high school, I didnā€™t know what my life would be or look like. I always had a passion and love for children. I use to help out my mother when she would babysit, and I would also take care of my younger sister, cousins, and even family friends. The ability to care for and love children were always something that stuck with me because I felt very passionate about it. I now work and assist at a daycare with children from infant to two years old. Choosing human services as my major felt right being that I have the experience of working with children and the characteristics of a human services professional. Characteristics such as being a good listener, empathetic, compassionate, and having the desire to help others.Ā 

When I began my college experience in City Tech, I was assigned a mentor to help assist with anything educational and even personal information. She was the one that told me about this phrase by Gandhi. My mentor was studying in the same field, human services, as for me and was very passionate about her goals. She was the reason I didnā€™t want to give up when I felt discouraged about school. She guided me through every course I took, gave me advice, proofread my assignments, and helped with any service I needed like contact information of professors, links to websites for free textbooks, etc. Seeing her do this for not only me but other newbies in the human services department and also doing her work and personal life, made me realize how much someone can care about another individual. And I believe thatā€™s what a human services professional is all about.Ā 

Having the ability to care and assist for others and putting others before yourself when in need is what I look forward to doing in my career. As a future social worker or child specialist, itĀ will be my duty to serve those in need. I believe itā€™ll be something Iā€™ll be good at being that I have most characteristics of a helper and human service professional. In my friendships and relationships, I am always genuine, Iā€™m always the one people come to for advice, and being kind and respectful is important in this field. Furthermore, working with children especially has always been something I find myself enjoying and naturally achieving.Ā 

The human services community is all about human dignity. Itā€™s about helping people find stability and providing basic needs like counseling, food, shelter, treatments for substance abuse, etc. It is about helping others reach their goals, encouraging self-sufficiency, and enabling happiness in their lives, not only their lives but ours also. Gandhiā€™s quote means putting the needs of others before your own will bring you closer to appreciating yourself. When I work with children or even help out other individuals, it brings me a sense of peace and purity knowing that Iā€™ve made a change in someone elseā€™s life.

 

WEEK 2

DAY ONE HW

After reading the first few pages of “The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao,” I found it to be interesting because I was able to understand and learn an ancient folktale from Santo Domingo. My mother use to tell me some scary stories that she’s been told or even ones that she’s experienced, and I always found them interesting. Reading the first few pages of this book, reminded me of those scary stories. Ā However, I didn’t understand some things from the text such as the title correlating to the curse, fuku. The writer starts by informing the readers about “fuku” and what it means but then the title doesn’t match what he states about this meaning. After reading the title I think of something marvelous that Oscar Mao has been through or has done, but when reading the first seven pages, it talks about this curse that affects the lives of anyone who says a specific word. I found that confusing and more specifically when the writer says “It’s perfectly fine if you don’t believe in these “superstitions.” It’s better than fine-it’s perfect.” I found this very difficult to understand because he just gave a list of examples of bad things happening to those who didn’t believe in this curse. Maybe he’s being sarcastic? I don’t get how the title is stating Oscar Mao has a wondrous life which is a great life but talks about a curse. But then again maybe he is being sarcastic.

 

DAY TWO HW

I am a part of the Hispanic community, the NYC community, and being a student. Growing up in my household, we only spoke Spanish so that was all I could speak and understand very young. However, when I was in school here in NYC, I was able to learn, study, and experience the English language. Being a student and being a part of an English-speaking community, I’ve had to get used to speaking this language only. I learned Spanish because of my parents, who are both from Honduras. They only understood Spanish and that was the language we communicated in in our home. But as my siblings and I got older, living in NYC, we were able to learn English because of school. During my middle and high school years, I lost a little of my Spanish since English is my first language and it’s hard keeping up with both languages because at home I’m speaking one language, but then at school or outside of my home, I speak English so it’s like living two lives. Nevertheless, as I speak more Spanish at home, I was able to get back to speaking and writing both languages fluently. I completely agree and can relate to this writer, Perri Klass, because when you learn something and are used to a repetitive pattern, it stays with you and you either have to make both work or just focus on one, and even so, I’ve chosen to work with both languages.

 

Weekly Assignment

Day One HW:
After reading and watching both the video and article, I found it interesting that a personā€™s name and where theyā€™re from has more meaning than we think. In the video, Mohamed Hassan explained his name and how other people always misjudged him for being white since he has blue eyes and the complexion of his skin. He felt joy when being mistaken as a white man but when asked for his name it was like he felt disappointment. After learning his name and the importance of it including his background and religion, he now appreciates who he is and his name and pronounces his name the way his mother calls him. In the article, Hanif Willis Abdurraqib explains how difficult it is to balance out American life and Arabic life as a teen here in America. He used Zayn Malik, the pop star from One Direction as a role model. Hanif relates to Zayn in terms of having two different realities. I believe it is difficult to balance out the world you live in and the world thatā€™s in your home. I was born and raised in Brooklyn, New York but both my parents are from Honduras. I can relate to Hanif and Mohamed in a way because growing up I always found it annoying when people did not know how to pronounce my name correctly when they would see how itā€™s spelled. My name is Johana, not with two Nā€™s but with one and with an H. I usually get called ā€œJo-Hannahā€ but my name is pronounced, ā€œJo-Ana.ā€ I also hated the way people thought my name was spelled. There was even a time when a teacher told me my name is supposed to be spelled ā€œJohanna.ā€ After listening to a podcast about our names being our identity, I learned that it is okay to correct others when pronouncing your name wrong and even spelling it wrong. Your name belongs to you and you have the right to correct others. I felt like that was truly important.

DAY TWO HW:
1. In his article, Mike Bunn writes ā€œYou are already an author.ā€ He is talking about me and I think he means when writing I have the power to write whatever I want and I can choose the words I want in a sentence, so therefore Iā€™m considered the author. The way I write and my choice of words is in my hands so thatā€™s authorship. One of the things I already write is journaling and there I get to talk about my feelings, my decisions, my life, my goals, my family, etc. I have control of what to write so Iā€™m considered an author. This existing expertise can help me now in college reading and writing because like Bunn said ā€œReading in a particular way could also make me a better writer.ā€ Understanding what Iā€™m reading is important because that way I develop my questions and conclusions and like Bunn said I can understand what the author meant when writing. If someone else read my journal I would want them to be able to understand what I wrote and want my audience to feel my emotions.
2. In Bunnā€™s article, I realized that he used headings when transitioning to other aspects of his writing. Furthermore, he had sections like ā€œWhat does it mean to read like a writer?ā€ ā€œHow is RLW different from ā€œnormalā€ writing?ā€ ā€œWhy learn to read like a writer?ā€ etc. I would like to do this in my writing because I feel like itā€™s very neat and in order so thatā€™ll also help my audience get a gist and better understanding of what Iā€™m trying to say.

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