Atlas is a 14-year-old boy. Today is his first day in high school. He used to be very shy and timid, and his grades were not good. Often bullied by others. Someone scribbled on his desk, dumped trash on him while he was in the bathroom, and even beat him secretly. Even if he told his parents and teachers, it didn’t help. He thought about transferring to another school, but his parents did not agree with him because of work problems. He also thought about an escape by suicide, but he didn’t have the courage to face death. But this time was different. After seeing the man who had bullied him every day, Lucas was also attending this high school. He decided to fight back against Lucas thoroughly so that no one would bully him again. What he has to do is to defeat the bastard who once didn’t treat him as a human from one of two aspects: eloquence, and violence.
“Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx” (noisy talking sound) Atlas walked into the school building. “Hey! Look who this is? Isn’t this our stupid coward Atlas?” Lucas spotted Atlas and pushed away from the crowd and walked towards him. “You dare to show up in front of me again, crying to call mother this time? Lucas mocked. Atlas turned his head in response to the voice and saw that it was the face that disgusted him. He watched Lucas walking towards him without saying a word. Lucas said, “I was so scared that I couldn’t speak? Look at your timid look. “Atlas’ body was trembling slightly. He was not afraid, but excited. Today, he can finally get rid of the cowardly self in the past.” Hey! Lucas! You disgusting thing that just came out of the toilet, how does the lunch taste?” “Wow!” Everyone exclaimed. Atlas felt that he had really changed. He wouldn’t have said anything like this before.” Listen to what you are saying What Atlas, do you want to be crushed by me like an ant? “Lucas is very angry. This is the first time he has seen such an Atlas. He feels that he has been severely insulted. But Atlas does not feel that way. He is now full of excitement, looking forward to The long-awaited moment finally came,” Houhou, this time the ants are different, it came from desert. “Lucas discovered that the guy in front of him might have really changed, but he would never allow this to happen. Atlas can only be the previous Atlas. Lucas pointed to Atlas’ The nose said, “Get ready to be beaten by me to cry and call mama!”
Nice set-up. He’s hardly an “ordinary” kid though, is he? I guess he’s ordinary if you live in a world where there are magical academies ;-). I’m assuming that you put that introduction there as a way to tell us what’s going to happen — that our young hero is going to have to battle. What I’d like to know more about is Atlas’ character — is he bold, shy, studious, someone who only wants to have fun — and how that might affect what he’s going to have to choose to do when faced with the villain. This isn’t a real story, just the tease. You’ll need to really expand it to make it into an IF story. But it’s fun so far.