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Unit 1 final draft about my one experience with education.

Nowadays education has become the most important and valuable things in our life. Our world is constantly changing and developing. In this modern world we need to be educated to be able to live and survive in the modern society. Proper and good education is really important for all of us because education teaches us how to become an intelligent person. Education gives us knowledge, values, skills and a better life. In order to live a good and peaceful life, we need to be educated. In my life education is important but to learn and experience something new everyday is also important too. For me we just donā€™t get knowledge from books and articles. We also educate ourselves from many experiences. In my life I have experienced two different types of education from two different countries. And I find myself lucky on this. Because not everyone can experience what I have experienced already. Today I want to share my 8th grade englishĀ  final exam experience. It was in my country before I came to the United States.

I was born and grew up in Bangladesh, which is my country. In my country the education system is very different from the United States. In my country there is a lot more competition in the schools than here. I remember I was one of the best students in my middle school and I kept my position until I got here. I want to share my english final exam experience here. I was in 8th grade. I was taking my state test which was also my final exam in 8th grade. My exams were going good. It was a sunny day after I finished my math exam and I got home around 4pm. I was happy and tired. Right after I got home I remember my mom was in front of the door and waiting for me just to ask me if I was okay and how was my test? I replied to my mom with a happy face that I did really good and my day was great. After she heard from me she told me to go to the bathroom and wash my face and hand. After I washed my face I came to my room and she called me to eat. I went to the kitchen and I ate rice and some other spicy food. While eating I was thinking and smiling that when the exam comes my mom always treats us better. She always makes our favourite food. After I ate I came to my room and I started looking at my books and suddenly realized that my english exam is tomorrow. I got nervous. I still donā€™t know why but I used to be very nervous about my english exams. I started opening my books because I knew that If I want a high average grade I have toĀ memorize everything in my syllabus. I started studying. Suddenly after 2 to3 hours I started feeling sick. I called my mom and she told me I had a little fever. I didnā€™t care about my fever. I took the fever medicine and started studying again. I studied the whole night before my exam.Ā 

After studying the whole night I woke up the next day for my english exam with my little fever. I get ready with a nervous face. I ate my breakfast because I knew if I got hungry I would forget everything and I would not be able to write anything. Then I went to the school where I was supposed to take my final english exam. It was a public school and also an education center. Like every other day I went to the classroom and sat in my place. In my country when its final exam teachers from the school decided your seat and put your name there. You have to go to the correct room and find your name on the desk. ItĀ  was 9 am in the morning. I started my exam. It was going well but at the end when I was writing my essay I forgot the last part. I didnā€™t know what happened to me but I completely forgot the last part. I got really scared. I didnā€™t know what to do. So I asked one of my friends to help me but unfortunately she was stuck too. It was only a three hours exam and I had only half an hour left to finish the exam. At that moment I stopped writing and started thinking that If I didnā€™t do well I am not going to get a 5.0 GPA. Because the highest GPA in my country for a state exam is 5.0. Only if you get 80 above in your every exam then you will get the 5.0 GPA and I wanted that. I had a 5.0 GPA in 5th grade state exam and I wanted that again. So I started writing again. I finished my essay with my own words. Then I submitted my exam at the correct time.

After a month finally that day arrived. It was the time when I was about to get my results of my exams. I was nervous and scared. I was quiet the whole day because I was worried. Then in the afternoon around 6pm my dad came home with the results and gave my result paper to me. I saw my result and I didn’t get a 5.0 GPA. The one thing that shocked me was that I did really well in my english exam but only in one subject I didnā€™t get a 80 which is Bengla and it is also my own language. I had a 78 only for 2 points. I didnā€™t make it. I was sad but my parents told me that it doesnā€™t matter what isĀ your gpa in your transcript, the one thing does matter right now is that you did really hard work and you are still a successful student.They also told me that they are really happy and proud with my result.I had the highest gpa in my whole class. Sometimes when people think that something is really hard for them and they start working on it and they actually did the best on that thing because they gave their 100% on this thing and forget about others like I did. I thought Bengla is the easiest subject for me because thatā€™s my language and I started learning Bengla since I was born. But the result was unacceptable and something else than I was expected.Ā 

It was a great experience for me and I will never forget that experience. This experience teaches me to never take one thing very seriously and not to forget about others. Donā€™t put yourself completely on one thing too much. It also teaches me that you donā€™t only get knowledge from books, you have your own knowledge inside and you just need to know how to use them at the correct time. If I didn’t finish my essay I wouldā€™ve gotten a bad grade in english too. But I believed in myself and I finished it. It sounds funny that to write something in my own words why is that too difficult for me because in my country everything is different. If you write exactly the same as the book the teacher will give you a 100 in your exam no doubt. Because thatā€™s how they grade students’ papers there. But when I came to the United States then I realized that No! you donā€™t have to memorize the book to get a good grade in your exam. I saw that here in high school they donā€™t even use books. After I got here I got to know more about myself and about my skills, my knowledge etc. So this was my experience on the day of my english final exam in 8th grade where I learned that IĀ  can do better in anything at any situation if I believe in myself.

 

 

 

1st Paragraph Unit One Project

My experiences with education in the past have been slightly disappointing. When I first started going to school I lived in Queens, I often transferred schools not due to any real particular reason it’s just that my parents would change their mind about a school really frequently. This caused me to not really build any relationship with any of the teachers or students Iā€™ve met because I felt as though it wouldn’t last so there was no point. After I graduated 8th grade I moved to the Bronx to start high school, again I felt as though building a bond with anyone would be pointless. However, after my first year 2 years I realized Iā€™m going to be here to stay and I urged myself to make the best with where I am. I became more interactive in the classroom and attempted to participate more, and since I was more engaged in the classroom my level of understanding of the topic increased. I learned that by regardless of the situation, if you are determined to learn and you socialize with the person/people your learning from and learning with you get a better understanding by viewing their perspective.

Essay 1 Draft. someone comment!

What does Education mean to you? Anyone can easily say education to them is to get knowledge, to learn about something one did not know yesterday, or to learn a trade toward a career. I am not one to disagree with anyoneā€™s opinion on why education is needed and every day is a new learning experience but what does education mean to me? Was it the same as the person next to me? A young kid from Bushwick, Brooklyn, the product of Ecuadorian and Puerto Rican parents– hands down my educational experience was a limbo between who I am and what I needed to learn. Even with this adversity, it has also made me stronger and eager to strive.

Growing up with my mother believe it or not, we spoke English in my house– English is our first language. Even before enrolling to school– ā€œGarcia? English or Spanish forms?ā€ Never ending situation till this day. The question is always in the air on whether I was born here or born ā€œover thereā€ but I knew that ā€œover thereā€ was actually a car ride away. I feel that my life through schoolĀ  was always a test to prove I belong with everyone else and not thrown in ESL class where ā€œthey thoughtā€ I belong. In the 5th grade I had a teacher Mrs. Silvas I will never forget her. She was in her 60ā€™s then, always well dressed with red lipstick and the most beautiful pearl. Something about her that caught all us 10-11 years old attention. She made learning fun, she didn’t care if you were white, purple, black, or yellow everyone learned the same way. Reading all the Harry Potter books was long but joyful. 20 plus years later she stood with me, especially when it was time to start a new task she would make us do 20 jumping jakes– ā€œLets go! Wake up! Time to thinkā€ I never understood as a kid why jumping around would make me think better but I guess it now. After reading ā€œI just wanna be Averageā€ by Mike Rose I smiled because he talked about his neighborhood and how each teacher had their own way of teaching but each teacher stood with him. Especial his teacher Jack MacFarland remained me so much of my teacher– taught their heart out and pushed their students when no one else cared. They brought the life back into teaching and became the light that some students need.

School was never really my best friend at the end of the day, did lots of ā€œgetting byā€ if I got a 65 or higher it would definitely keep my mom off my back. Also there was no real push at home to continue studying or going forward- I only have one cousin that went to school forever, everyone else dropped out. I would always joke with her and say ā€œYou went to college for all of usā€, she has 3 degrees. At 19 I tried to go to my local community college to start somewhere, Liberal Arts. It was tough, I had no motivation or structure to succeed. I had this one teacher in high school I can not forget though every time I felt like I was going to slack off, Mr. Verdi. Mr. Verdi was a short man, with light brown hair, and green eyes, gentle eyes never had a loud voice but he was as real as they come. He is no longer with us anymore in this earth but he would always say ā€œGarcia, it is up to you if you want to success no one else is going to do it for you– I am not because I did all my work to be a teacher no one helped me. I can only guide you, you have to do the workā€ is that not the truth? ā€œGet out of my head Verdiā€ as I smiled at the sky. He motivated me to get my lazy behind back into school. No one will do the work that I need to do to show my children that is education, with all the obstacles are worth the fight.Ā  In the words of Stephon Hobson, ā€œWithout the books I read, I wouldn’t know other peoples methods of motivation to overcome obstacles.ā€ When I read this quote I thought to myself , he is absolutely correct because without education we wouldn’t know what other people did to move forward.

Life has thrown so many wrenches my way and I am witness because I had to take cover every time. It is okay to postpone your goals sometimes just as long as you donā€™t put them on the back burner. I will always be on the fence about my approach to school but I know that college is a big must toward my goals. I am forever grateful for my culture and hardship that gave me the strength I need to say ā€œHer I got this!ā€ Because like Mr. Verdi says here and there ā€œNo one is going to help you but you.ā€ Thank you.

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