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Author: Frida Martinez (Page 1 of 8)

Shitty Draft Final Reflection- Frida

This semester has been unusual for all of us. Before finding out about coronavirus, I was so excited about college. I looked forward to getting the first feeling of college life. Unfortunately, this semester we spent our English class online. However, it wasn’t all that bad at all. At the beginning of the semester, I thought my writing skills were good. Looking back at my old work made me realize that wasn’t the case.  I have developed new writing skills and took the feedback from my peers and professor. I used new ways of formatting and structure in my essays. It helped me in English class, but it helped me in my other classes. I remember thinking writing the perfect essay was all about using big words and the right transition words.

Revisions – Frida

For my revisions, I’m mainly focused on improving my unit 2 annotated bibliography. I noticed I made a few mistakes that are fixable. I will use the rubric as a guide to help me make corrections. As for the unit 1 education narrative, I am working on it first and looking over a few things. I noticed that some of my sentences weren’t as clear as others. I will rephrase a few sentences from the education narrative.

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