I’m doing good about revision so far. I’m fixing some wrong words and deleting some sentences that not necessary to the article. I will add some descriptive elements in my article, that will make readers feel it happens on themself. I notice that I can find many things to fix at this time I read. I think this is a way to check my own work. The difference is the time, it makes me have a strangeness to my work. So I can find things normally I don’t see . It’s always hard to check your own work when you just finish it.