My name is Jaden and I like to play basketball and play videogames I hang with my friends a lot we go all over the city late at night doing whatever, taking pictures eating food and something interesting about me is that I can skate I go to the skate park with my friends every now and then and there always someone new at the park that we can try tricks with.
You really have not told us much in this introduction. Please write more. Look at my instructions carefully. I told you to write TWO full paragraphs. All students need to practice developing ideas into more full paragraphs. And in these low-stakes HW assignments, it’s a good place to practice these skills. Please do this again and write more!