Project#3 Draft-Hydroplane Racing

4 Comments

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   Javier Garcia

   May 9, 2023 at 11:21 pm

   There is only one minor error in the following text. The sentence “The reason I chose this topic is because I enjoy all types of racing and learning about the differences between all vehicles” could be improved by removing the word “all” before “vehicles,” as it is repetitive. The revised sentence would read, “The reason I chose this topic is because I enjoy all types of racing and learning about the differences between vehicles.”

   So far this is amazing and everything is perfect. The last thing I would say is an example of the concept of Newtons second law and more context and the level of audience to give more specific feedback.

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   Atta Tariq

   May 12, 2023 at 3:47 pm

   Amazing and well-defined, it. I appreciate how you clarified and separated things. You used some very helpful equations. I think that was generated by AI, but whoever produced it deserves an A.

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   Ameer Shadick

   May 12, 2023 at 4:54 pm

   This draft is very well detailed, though there are a little run on sentences that could be adjusted. But overall its really great and you did an amazing job, I think you chose Option A

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   Maharin Khondoker

   May 15, 2023 at 1:53 am

   I’m really enjoying reading your project. Very well organized, and everything you guys perfectly describe here. Overall, it’s amazing.

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