I wasn’t sure which one to pick but, Donald M. Murray shows the different ways we should be thinking about when we do the revision process and how other writers do their revision process which we can use in our own writing. I chose two because I think it goes hand in hand together Murrayâs says,âNext writers look for meaning in the information. The specifics must build to a pattern of significance. Each piece of specific information must carry the reader toward meaning….Writers reading their own drafts are aware of audience. They put themselves in the readerâs situation and make sure that they deliver information which a reader wants to know or needs to know in a manner which is easily digested. Writers try to be sure that they anticipate and answer the questions a critical reader will ask when reading the piece of writing.” Murrayâs is telling us that after careful picking  they type of information that should be put in your writing that is of most importance for the readers to understand what theyâre are reading thatâs wouldnât just be information that leads nowhere. Then writers have to put themselves in the readers shoes and ask themselves are these details easy too comprehend? Does it need to be included in the writing or can the writing piece be done without this facts? I supposed these are just some questions they can ask themselves so they can know if the information they have included is beneficial to both writer and reader. I can apply this to improve my own work because I never think if the information I have written is of importance or not which I should start doing when I revise my work or become a reader when Iâm reading my own work. I have chosen this to help focus on this element over the others because now I can become more aware of my audience and seeing what facts I should be including when I write.
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Hello my fellow teenagers/ young adults! In this Ted Talk I will be talking about how to differentiate love and lust. Love is one word that has been trending as of late because a lot of us are having the cravings of being held, spoken nicely too and even someone to call our own. While we are seeing these things there has been another thing that has been trending around social media and that is âDTN4FLâ (donât trust niggas for life) and the reason why is because a lot of us have gotten our hearts broken by someone who wasnt meant to be in our lives in the first place. Sometimes the experience is needed so we can share it with one another to help eachother grow. But based on my research I feel like we can detect if what we have between us and that significant other is true love of lust.When I was searching for resources I found this Ted Talk called â is it love or lust by Terri Orbuch” and as i was listening to her she was explaining a few steps on how to know if it’s love and she said â When its love there is nothing to hide, when it’s love you will want to present that person to your family as your significant otherâ and it’s very rare for young adults to present their significant others to their family (unless they know that their kid is a heartbreaker). As young people we all desire that ideal high school relationship that will one day lead to marriage further in the future but when you think about it those types of relationships are very rare. As I continued to listen Terri said that âit’s lust when both people in the relationship are just thinking about themselves â. My main point is that observing is key in the relationship, with observation you will be able to know where the relationship is headed too.
Online learning overall has been something in which would always be considering as challenging in my eyes not only because of school but being home everyday watching my life past without living ya know. It’s become extremley hard to make a promise and keep a goal in which use to be so easy to do but I have been feeing so unmotivated. There has been times in which I would write but easily be misguided not by the teacher but myself as my mind would wonder. Sometimes I would even be in class with the mindset of receiving knowledge but once the class is over it would only become a distant memory and every day would go by and it would become faint. In the beginning of the semester I use to set goals in which would be to pass, and to stay focus, but it was so easy to say that I will and convince myself and others that I will but as time went by it became harder and harder to even get out of bed in the morning. I mean as of now I am currently passing and to be honest I am surprised because of the lack of confidence I had in my self, do not get me wrong I did my work it was on time but sometimes it wasn’t like I said before it has been rough. Looking back and to now I guess you can say I’m proud for finishing my work because in high school I wouldn’t even care to finish it, but i’m proud that I even got my work done. To be honest I do not think I was surprised by anything this semester Im honestly glad that I made it through the 1st semester.I figured that college was not going to be no walk through the park, and was not going to be anything like high school. Â Then again going through with online learning and being home everyday its became harder and harder for me to just not throw my computer across the room. Â Looking at it now I think my goals was too small, it wasn’t the goals for myself that cause me to feel this way I think its more of the fact that my teenage years have been taken, and I haven’t been able to feel the college experience for myself , and get a chance to meet new people and actually get a chance to talk to my professors if you understand what i’m saying. Well at the end of the day I know for a fact that I could do better than I did I just wish that I had a better support system. Hopefully I answered the question I’m pretty sure that I did.
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