I really enjoyed the way whole process leading up to the climax. When the main character realized they were in a river. The description of her feeling freedom in a such a dire situation. Although I had a little difficulty processing the beginning. The text help draw an image in my head of the situation and plant me in the book. It was a good read. I’m not sure if the book will continue like this since it seems the ending of the character is near, but it’s only the beginning.
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I also enjoyed the process leading up to the climax. I would love to see a co tinted part and find out what the narrator has in store for them next.
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It’s interesting how you mentioned that this chapter could be the end of the book because it does seem like that. Even on its own, this chapter seems to have a mini arc that could end itself without being a part of a book.
This part did sure come off as a “ending piece” so I agree it did seem like an ending of the everything was falling together.