There appears to be a mechanic involved. She seems to be using her gloves to fix a cub like technology. She is doing this because she has a passion for technology as you can see how she is smiling. There does appear to be a specific time, however it looks like there is a sunset. It also appears that she is repairing her cub in a somewhat forest like place seeing as there are trees in the area.
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I enjoyed how you described how she enjoys what she do and how you depict the setting. I can picture how she look and where she is at.
I like how this seems more like a descriptor, but on the same beat I think you could’ve made more of an actual story here. This is the start of a story, telling the reader what’s what, but I’m not really seeing a plot going on.
I agree with you I believe she has a passion for technology. I enjoyed how you incorporated the setting
I agree with you I believe she has a passion for technology. I enjoyed how you incorporated the setting