Eva Machauf | COMD 3501 OL26 | Fall 2020

Snug Harbor Final Ads


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  1. Eva Machauf

    The address and directions are too prominent. They should be at the bottom. If you can raise the flowers up and tighten the leading on the type on top you will have a better flow and hierarchy. You have some good tag lines, ‘Bloom into action’ some need editing. “flourish in nature’ (not ‘into’); ‘Burst into flower; maybe ‘Grasp the beauty’ ‘Live the green life’ can work but not with that image, looks like a bouquet. The tag lines should not be in the same font as the logo. The web site should be much less prominent.

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