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Students explore the role of professional designer as they are challenged to create an appropriate, unified, multi-part presentation showcasing multiple applications and the design thinking behind an identity program.
Thursday, 2:30 – 5:50 PM
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4 class hours, 3 credits
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The address and directions are too prominent. They should be at the bottom. If you can raise the flowers up and tighten the leading on the type on top you will have a better flow and hierarchy. You have some good tag lines, ‘Bloom into action’ some need editing. “flourish in nature’ (not ‘into’); ‘Burst into flower; maybe ‘Grasp the beauty’ ‘Live the green life’ can work but not with that image, looks like a bouquet. The tag lines should not be in the same font as the logo. The web site should be much less prominent.