My dad hung up and tears began to stream down my face. I was crying not just because I was in an unknown country surrounded by strangers but because loneliness crawled inside my skin and it hurt. It hurt just …
Category: Unit 1
One Scene – Jeffery Dai
Humiliating in The Moment, Funny in Retrospect
It was November 11, 2020, and a teenage boy was hunched over his laptop on a desk in the corner of a room. With the now-forgotten garbled words emanating from the high school …
outline and opening-Kayla Griffiths
1.what saved me
2. The main focus of my education narrative is to explain how cutting my hair helped me develop connections with genuine people
Event 1.I decide to cut my hair with the help of my mother and older …
Outline and Opening – Adan G.
- I will use the Mentor Quote prompt. I might also use Between Two Worlds.
- The Main Idea of my education narrative will be showing that I was always an obedient Chinese daughter and followed my father’s wishes to become a
Outline and Opening – Michael M
1)Writing prompts saved
2)The Main idea of my education narrative will be about how going to a high school of architecture made me feel like a place where I belong
3)Outline
I. Intro: I am in my 2nd year of …
Outline and Opening -Ethan Torres
- I will use the mentor quote prompt and I might also use between two Worlds.
- The main idea of my narrative essay is to show everything I went through to get to college, and everything I learned along the way
Outline and Opening – Brianna L.
My chosen prompt will be Resilience.
The Main Idea of my essay has to do with my struggle with my mental health during my last year or high school and how I was capable of overcoming it.
Intro: (opening) What …
Outline and Opening Paragraph –Ilham
- I will use the Mentor Quote Prompt. I might also use Between Two Worlds.
- The main idea of my education narrative is to show what I went through, throughout elementary, middle, and high school, how it affected my educational life,
Outline and Opening –Evelyn Castillo
- My writing prompt will be between two worlds and saved.
2. The main idea of my essay is to show how I have chosen my own path in life and how I can move forward with the help of others.
Outline and Opening – Raul M
- The writing prompt that I will use is “SAVED.”
- The Main idea of my education narrative will be that I was a lost kid during high school until I found someone to guide me in the right direction and even
