What parts/tasks have you completed?
I have completed my whole outline.
What do you still have to do to get it done?
I am working on finishing PowerPoint slides and filming myself.
What obstacles are you encountering?
I was just
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Author: Evelyn Castillo
Outline- Ted Talk- Evelyn Castillo
This is a Ted Talk.
- Hook
- Introduction
- Key/main ideas
- First Key Idea (Pain dismissal in history)
- Second Key idea (Pain dismissal/gender disparity in medical education)
- Third Key Idea (How can we advocate to be heard at the doctor/why is this
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Mentor Text Analysis- Evelyn Castillo
For the intro of this video, the hook is switching from one thing to another (switching from the little girl to pictures with voice in the background). I think what makes the best impact is the sound effect. The mentor
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Project Proposal — Evelyn Castillo
Throughout my research I gained the understanding that gender disparity is deeply rooted into the medical system that even women can dismiss a woman’s own pain not because they want to but because gender bias has been taught for centuries
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Possible Genres — Evelyn Castillo
Research Question: How does misdiagnosis and dismissal affect women’s health?
The three genres that I am considering are video essay, podcast and poetry video. Although I have three different genres I have narrowed down my list to only one genre
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RAB Source Entry 2- Evelyn Castillo
Research Question: How does Pain Dismissal Affect Women’s Health?
Source Entry 2: Op-Ed Piece
MLA Citation
Yanique, Tiphanie. “Opinion: My Pregnancy Caused Crushing Pain. Why Didn’t My Doctors Think That Was a Problem?” Los Angeles Times, 26 Mar. 2023, www.latimes.com/opinion/story/2023-03-26/black-women-maternal-health-pain-doctors-pregnancy-birth-control
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My 3 Sources- Evelyn Castillo
My research question is: How does Pain Dismissal Affect Women’s Health?
Here are links for my three sources:
Source 1 news piece
https://www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/medical-mistakes-are-likely-women-minorities-rcna133726
Source 2 opinion piece
Source 3 Ted Talk video
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Annotated Source 1 Picture – Evelyn Castillo
MLA citation
Szabo, Liz. “Medical Errors Kill Scores Each Year in the U.S., Especially Women and Minorities.” NBCNews.Com, NBCUniversal News Group, www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/medical-mistakes-are-likely-women-minorities-rcna133726. Accessed 22 Mar. 2024.
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Rhetorical Analysis and Quotables – Evelyn Castillo
Part 3 Rhetorical Analysis
The article “Schools are Killing Curiosity: Why We Need to Stop Telling Children to Shut Up and Learn” authored by Wendy Berliner discusses the detrimental impact of discouraging curiosity in schools and advocates for children’s curiosity
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Summary Practice – Evelyn Castillo
Part 1 MLA Citation:
“‘Schools Are Killing Curiosity’: Why We Need to Stop Telling Children to Shut up and Learn.” The Guardian, Guardian News and Media, 28 Jan. 2020, www.theguardian.com/education/2020/jan/28/schools-killing-curiosity-learn.
Part 2 Summary
In the article “Schools Are Killing
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