After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to add subheadings to introduce a new topic. After reading Development Writing Strategies, I will add in more imagery to describe how the yearbook class actually was. I will also make the connection between my story and Malcolm X more clear. Instead of just saying things, I will go into detail to show them. I will also create a theater of the mind and make an extended scene for the reader to be more entertained. I also plan to remove unnecessary parts that don’t pertain to the story. I also want my ending to be a little better as well. Thank you for your feedback, Professor.
