After reading Professor Wu’s comments, I will develop one more scene towards the beginning of my essay. I will explain the hardships in that scene like the comments told me too and also fix my grammar and run ons. I …
Category: Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative – Daniela v.
After reading Professor Wu’s comments, I will be working more towards creating better scenes and adding more dialogue to my narrative. I will also work on the overall structure and set a clear main idea. I will be meeting with …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative- Joshua A..
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to be more specific with details. I need to make sure my word play is right. I need to develop my story better with evidence to make sure …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative-Belinda
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to include some rhetorical appeals since I didn’t include it and fix some sentence errors in my source entry 1. I also have to make a stronger reflection …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative- Dessire
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop my summaries further. I also plan to make sure that I distinguish the three persuasive appeals clearly within each section of my writing. After this I …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative-Taniesha
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to fix my grammars like the fragment sentences in the first few paragraphs. I also plan to show what’s going instead of telling in the last few paragraphs …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Nyazia B
After reading over Professors Wu’s end comments on my FD 1 , I plan to add a few more scenes throughout my story in the middle. Also I plan to break up my run on sentences and add more descriptive …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative- Savion
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop my scenes with more imagery and try to add some more visuals to it. I also plan to look over all my grammar and punctuation to …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Bri
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to add subheadings to introduce a new topic. After reading Development Writing Strategies, I will add in more imagery to describe how the yearbook class actually was. I …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative — Your Name
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop two more scenes at key points in my story, in P. 4 and P. 6. Also, I plan to break up large blocks of dialogue by …
