Final Revision Ideas ED Narratives – Sindy J.

After reading Professor Wu’s comments, I will develop one more scene towards the beginning of my essay. I will explain the hardships in that scene like the comments told me too and also fix my grammar and run ons. I will also add more to my closing paragraphs so it can leave an impactful meaning.

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