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Happiest place in New york

One of my happiest places in New york is the Chelsea piers sports center in Manhattan. This center offers a number of sports such as ice skating, roller skating, golf and more. When I first stepped inside, I could hear the loud screaming of players enjoying their time in the area. I see skaters speeding across the ice while trying to avoid those that have fallen. This makes me happy because it’s the best place for friends and family to spend time with each other while learning a new experience. It’s also an interactive environment for athletes and participants to get to know each other and raise a competitive spirit.

#Fun #Sports #Family #Athletes #GoodVibes #It’sLit

 

GPS Article Summary

This article by Lex Berko brigs up a concept that an individual can choose between a faster route, or a route that is more pleasant to experience. He shows that the primary job for maps is just to get you to a certain destination. But it doesn’t tell what you can encounter on during the course of your travel. the Yahoo company who ones Flickr uses this to conduct experiments to go into depth with their concept. They came to the conclusion that a route that is considered to be more pleasant would take a person a few minutes out of their way. Whether the person decides to sacrifice time or not varies.

When I read this article I immediately thought about other companies that are beginning to offer these kind of features in their map apps. In the next year or two, this may be something that every map will have as an option. It makes me think of how much we are beginning to advance with technology to the point where we can choose between something this simple. In my opinion, I would be interested in taking a detour, if it meant that I could visit the candy store near the supreme court on the way to class. Taking such a route would be more pleasant for me because I get to visit one of the only stores in Brooklyn that is fully dedicated to candy. Therefore my motive for taking a different route would be for food. It’s generally different for everyone because each individual has their own idea of what a pleasant route would be.

Project 1 reflection

Before this project, I would just look out my window and think nothing of what I say. This allowed me to take something so simple and see it through a completely different perspective. I’ve had the same view out that window for years and have never taken a minute to observe the simple things that are right outside.  In my opinion, the inking portion of the project was better for me to complete than the cut out piece. I feel that I had more control of what I was trying to accomplish with my work. My cut out could have been more precise with cleaner curves and edges. This was because I was just getting used to the tools I required, therefore some parts didn’t come out the way I intended. This project has taught me some things that I applied to project 2 and 3 but I’m always open to improvement.

Nebulous

Source: Merriam-Webster.com

Nebulous- unclear, vague or ill defined

When I came across this word in the text in class( What if you could choose between the fastest route and the most beautiful). My lack of knowledge of what this word meant made it confusing to understand what the text meant. Using context clues did not help the situation as much either. The sentence this word was found in states, ” But how do you quantify concepts as nebulous as beauty or happiness”. Finding the definition made the text simpler to understand as usual. But in this case I can know the specific question they’re trying to involved.

Article Summary

Title: “A literary visitor strolls in from the airport”, article by Charles McGrath

This passage entails a story about a Mr. Self, A cab driver from London who comes to New York for the first time on December 6, 2006. The text captures the idea that walking throughout the city is not a common today as it used to be many years ago. It reveals Mr. Self’s past as a heavy alcoholic and and a serious drug addict. It also shows how he managed to put that aside by beginning  walking as a replacement or a form of coping. McGrath shows how walking through the city of New york caused Mr. Self to be able to see aspects of the land that many others have not discovered because they drive rather than walk. He even says, “People don’t know where they are anymore” with a tone of slight frustration because walking through an are is the only way left for a person to explore.  It also connects to Colson Whitehead’s “City limits” with the concept of overlapping cities when Mr. Self points out the interface of a black and Hispanic neighborhood to an Orthodox Jewish area.Most individuals may not even notice that such an overlap exist because no one thinks of walking along highways, or even walking to the heart of the city all the way from an airport.

Melancholy

Source- Merriam-Webster.com

Melancholy- a sad mood or feeling

I came across this vocabulary word in the article ” A literary visitor strolls from the airport”. It states, “.. Mr. Self, who is unusually tall and very thin and has a long melancholy face that he once described as looking like a bag of genitals…..” From the text it came from, I determined that it isn’t a positive word that people may use often to describe an individual. Once I found the meaning of the world, I was able to picture the typical expression that Mr. Self may always have on. With this in mind, the actions that he takes on further in the passage makes more sense because I have more of an understanding of who this man is.

Project#2 Reflection (Mash-up displays)

This project introduced me to an unfamiliar concept that an individual can display the sound of music onto paper. First, we did a class demo where we listened to two different kinds of music. The first was Stegato which is a more loud and rough course music track. The next was Legato which is more monotone and flows more calmly. We then translated what we heard onto Bristol paper in the form of shapes and lines that would depict whether it was stegato or legato. When we created the mash-ups of these pieces, I was able to explore this concept into more depth which allowed me to get creative. Throughout each stage of this project, I felt that there was a significant connection that helped us to gradually understand music more, in a different way. There were aspects f the projects I think I could of done differently such as the inking mash-up. My edges could of been a little more smooth as I was told in the critique. The feedback that I received can only be used to help in my work in the future. Now that I know the specific things I can work on, I can display major improvement for the following projects.

Project#2 Reflection

For project 2, my juxtapositions consists of two different structures that are from two different times of New York. In the picture that was posted, you see an old church building to the right of the shot on Remsen street. In the far distance you will spot a tall silver skyscraper with hundreds of floors. As I stated in my project, this overlap was discovered by an accident. I was simply watching my back and looking up the block. I learned many things from my work in this project. For one, I was able to become more familiar with the environment around City Tech. I wouldn’t normally take a grand tour of the area on my own unless I were to get lost first. However, this project prevented major confusion while at the same time learning more about the city that I am from. I learned that as a writer, I have much improved in conveying my message to readers. With new vocabulary, I can apply greater detail for readers to understand and even imagine for themselves. I understood concepts that Whitehead wanted to convey such as the fact that every individuals New York is different. This means one citizen may  remember city one way, while someone else may be accustomed to an older version of the same city. They may not want to except that things have changed New York will never stop moving forward.

The completion of this project required a significant amount of time for me to complete the task. I spent approximately 2-3 hours a day planning out and refining my work so that it can pinpoint the questions that were asked. From this experience I realized the importance of spending time on your work. The more time and effort dedicated to the work, the greater the quality and depth it will be. For the next project, I will have to put even more time into my work, as if it is something for an interview. And if I don’t think the grade I receive is acceptable for me, I won’t hesitate to go back and correct it.

 

Project 2: Juxtaposition Final

In the city of New York, there are many aspects that are considered to be from the “Old New York” or the “Present day New York”. The combination of the two are what make up the very culture of New York. From the sky scrapers down town, to the man made residents from a nearby neighborhood, they each hold their own story. The location that I have chosen is fifteen minutes away from City Tech, and is on the intersection of Clinton and Remsen street. At this location I discovered an example of a  juxtaposition between the two New Yorks. It was as if I was standing before the timeline of the city, viewing two different stages of time.

In order to reach the destination, I decided to leave through the main entrance on 300 Jay street. This would be my starting position. Across the street is a construction site in progress. Up the block is a station of city bikes on racks. I walked in the direction of the city bikes and turned right onto the first intersected on Johnson street. I walked passed the school’s cafe and crossed Adams street which leads to the Brooklyn Bridge. I soon approached the intersection of Johnson street and Court street. As I walked south on Court  street I could see Columbus park on my left. This area consists of the Supreme court and the Borough Hall station for the 2,3,4,5, and R train. To my right was the New York sports club store. I decided to walk down the block of this store on Remsen street. On this block was the St. Francis college populated by dozens of students in front of the entrance. I walked to the end of the block and stopped at the intersection of Clinton and Remsen street. At this moment I looked back up the block and realized I had found my juxtaposition that I could potentially use. I had to find my position in the street to catch a suitable picture frame.

I consider my juxtaposition unique because I found it in the most unexpected place. It was sort of a planned mistake. I framed my picture in the intersection of Clinton and Remsen street. After physically standing in the road for a few minutes, I got a few good pictures and moved out the way of traffic. When someone first looks at the picture, they may not see my see my juxtaposition immediately. This juxtaposition entails an old church building to the right of the frame and a sky scraper in the far distance. The church has a pointed roof with black fences that circle the whole property. From what I could see, the outer material mainly consists of large brownish bricks. During the time this structure was built, there may not have been any construction materials that helped along with the process as there are today. It may have been built using a similar technique that the Incas used to make their own homes. This technique consisted of shaving down large rocks (using harder rocks) into the form of bricks. Each one would have to be the same size with clean straight edges in order to fit into place with the others. This process is repeated until a stable wall is built and held together using a glue like substance. The windows of this church may also hold their own story. These windows are known as stained glass windows because each one has an artistic image relating to the religion of the church. In this case you may see images of Mary holding baby Jesus, Jesus on a cross etc. In structures today, it is not likely you will find these kind of details that define it. From the outside it may seem as if there is more than one floor because the windows continue up in a second row. However, these structures simply have a high roof that go up to a pointed center. Based on the aspects of this building, I was able to determine that it was from an old New York.

In the distance, the second portion of my juxtaposition consist of a silver skyscraper reaching for the clouds. Unlike the church, this structure had hundreds of floors that allow you to see over the city. This is possible because in the new New York, we have access to tools and materials such as cranes, more metal, stronger glass, and even helicopters to put parts in place. The process to creating the master piece from the blue prints would be quicker to that of the church because of the helping hand of technology. It had a sleek glassy design that glistened in the suns light. At first sight I felt a futuristic vibe from the building. Its corners had sharper angles, and its smooth exterior would allow precipitation to race down the face of the windows with ease. After observing this juxtaposition I realized a sense of symbolism. Knowing that the church building represents the old New York, it represents the past as we know it. After following the road to its vanishing point,one can see the sky scraper in the center. I believe that this could symbolize the path to innovation, new ideas, and advancement from the old New York, to the new New York.

I chose this subject in particular because it pinpoints two completely different time periods of New York and brings them together into one frame. From the image I captured, I was able to see where we were as a city (before my time) as well as how far we have come. Over the course of the years the city has changed drastically, but the streets hold the history of what came before. Colson Whitehead supports my concept with what he says in his passage. He states, ” Our streets are like calenders containing who we are and who we will be next”. In this case, the “we” in this quote represents the path or destiny of our city. In this passage, Whitehead conveys the concept that the streets of the city record everything that happens and endures what will result from this as the new New York begins to emerge. My juxtaposition fits the concept that Whitehead brings across. As we know, the old church building in the photo is of the old New York representing who we once were. The photo also depicts Remsen street which leads to a single vanishing point pointing up to the sky scraper which is an achievement.

Whitehead also explains the concept of the overlap between the two cities. In the last paragraph of the passage he states, “What follows is my city, making it a guide book……It contains your neighborhood. Or doesn’t. We overlap. Or don’t. Maybe you’ve walked these avenues. Maybe it’s all Jersey to you”. I found this intriguing because it explains that the two different New Yorks are like a ” guide book” and the new New York is the latest city to be built onto what came before. He seems to be undecided at whether these New Yorks overlap or not. He tries to connect or relate to everyone who knows the city. This may be because a particular individuals version of New york my have been demolished, or lost in time and no longer exists.  But the reality is that most overlaps will always exist as long as the city begins to evolve. Therefore, this quote supports what my juxtaposition represents.

Overall, my juxtaposition depicts the proper overlap between the two New Yorks. As time progresses, new overlaps will continue to be created. Whitehead says that we must not fight the inevitable because nothing is meant to last forever. These eight million New Yorks he mentions will never be the same as the one I know or even the one my neighbor knows. But when we look back at the city we have grown to love, we can always spot a particular aspect that we can reminisce on from our own New york.

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The Boston Photographs: Summary

This article signifies a very dark time concerning the death of a woman and the near death of a child. The photos that were taken during this event bring back much emotions for people who heard about it or were in the are that day. The author explains how she never meant for things to turn out in such away. Originally, it was supposed to be a picture frame of a heroic fire fighter attempting to get a couple of citizens out of the way of danger. In an instant things took a turn for the worst when the platform collapsed and they could do nothing but go in the way of gravity. At that moment the author had caught several shots before the young lady fell to her demise. She explains that newspapers do not usually post any photos of death. She reveals that you never actually see a body of the person who died in the papers. She clearly expresses that death is apart of life, so what is the point of hiding something such as this.

In my opinion,if she had survived, these photos would have symbolized a whole new meaning. It would have been seen as a miracle that she survived such a fall. Therefore, these photos would have a more positive vibe. This article strikes me as informative because it opens my eyes to the fact that society tries to hide things from the public that they don’t believe should be seen. In a way it’s sort of a biased, because there are people  who believe that a reality such as death should not be hidden especially if it is something that is apart of life.