Category: Critique (Page 2 of 6)

Isadora Martinez | Jessie Zhang | Jonathan Lopez

IM – Jessie captured really well the life and enjoyment in a park on a sunny fun filled day and also captured the energy of a rainy day with its solitude and reflections from the puddles from multiple different angles.

JL – I think Jessie did a great job capturing the two completely different feelings during the day with joyous smiles and fun activities and the lonely vibe of the rainy day empty park.

IM – My suggestions would be to explore the playground at a time when it has more life and kids having fun. I enjoyed the person sliding down the slide and would love to see more of it.

JZ – I liked the shallow depth of field and how there still so much info in the background but the foreground element still captures your attention.

Daniel’s Photos

These are my favorite 4 photos from Daniel’s work. I think that he did a great job with these. In my opinion, he can improve these images by deciding what his focus point is.

Jamir had a really interesting set of dynamic photos here. There is so much movement happening in these still images. I particularly like the shots where either he or the ball are in mid-air or he is mid-movement. If I were to give my input on how to improve these images I would say that before Jamir starts his photo shoot, he should take a few test images to help him frame his entire shot. This way, he doesn’t accidentally slip out of frame and miss anything in the photos. Also, I think I might’ve liked to have seen these photos from another perspective other than low angle. (even though the low angle accentuates him jumping)

This is Amena Miah’s photo. I like the blurry effect because it shows us that it was taken in the middle of him running and I also like the background, there is space, which makes it easier to focus on the man running.