Category: Critique (Page 1 of 6)

October 13, 2020 / Nicole Biggs / 0 Comments

Drunk Teddy

Dunk Teddy

Sad Teddy1

Sad Teddy 2

Ramy Selen & Jonathan Baez Critic

A partial silhouette around the drunk Teddy

Crop out Camscanner in all photos

Play around with lighting for drunk teddy

The ideas behind all of the pictures was spot on

Critique(Andrew, Oneil, Amena, and Delbert)

October 13, 2020 / Oneil Anderson / 0 Comments

Amena’s Photos

great focus, vibrant colors and nice use of angles. would be amazing to have a freeze motion on the bee.

great focus, vibrant colors and nice use of angles. would be amazing to have a freeze motion on the bee.

Andrew’s Photos

great use of lighting. the final one needs its background cleaned up and the family one need something more to give of the emotions.

Midterm Part 1 Critique – Jonathan Baez

October 13, 2020 / Jonathan Baez / 0 Comments

Jonathan Baez

Jonathan Baez

From Nicole and Rany:

All photos look strong and have great depth of field.

3rd photo: Faster shutter speed would make the photo stronger.

4th photo: Frame the person more in the center is profile

Rany Selem

October 13, 2020 / Rany Selem / 0 Comments

Saturate the yellow step on the first photo
Make the lamp lights in the 3rd photo darker

Midterm Shoot 1

October 13, 2020 / Jamir Campbell / 0 Comments

Gloria had really interesting photos, I think the angles she chose were unique. Another reason I like the photos is because I love the shadows she created. She also did a great job of creating different moods, some picture give me a joyful , happy vibe while other’s give off mysterious vibes. overall I think she made some really nice pictures. some suggestions I would give is maybe do a couple of photos were your further back from the subject to give more space, maybe you could also take some pictures from an high angle.

Gloria had really interesting photos, I think the angles she chose were unique. Another reason I like the photos is because I love the shadows she created. She also did a great job of creating different moods, some picture give me a joyful , happy vibe while other’s give off mysterious vibes. overall I think she made some really nice pictures. some suggestions I would give is maybe do a couple of photos were your further back from the subject to give more space, maybe you could also take some pictures from an high angle.

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The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share

The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.