Practice  #1

Lili Velez Has a great topic and she captures the reader’s attention as soon as we start reading . The story was very interesting because I felt Identify with everything she was saying . “when a philosophy professor asks us to examine what is evil and what is good, that’s okay; we’re getting graded on it. But do we ask such questions in the cafeteria? In the dormitory? At home? Who needs to ponder academic questionsoutside of class? It’s an invasion of our private lives. ” I like how this sentence is strutured the way she uses the questions to made you feel more interested in the topic and also makes you as a college student think aoutside of the text to connect the text with your life is the perfect way to keep someone interested in yopur writting.

 

Practice #2

Nick have very good details in his story and every step he explained is very easy to understand so everyone could understand what was he trying to say. The feedback that nick get give him a big advantage in order to improve his writting and also help him on how to make his ideas clear and create good points of view based on his story.