Reviewing the feedback for my RAB, I realized that there are a lot of areas where I fell short of the assignment’s expectations. I feel like I overlooked crucial elements of the RAB. I did not provide enough quotations. I also did not explain my topic choice and the identification of my sources. I am definitely revising my RAB and will include everything I missed. The comments on the RAB made me reflect on my writing and made me come to an awakening that I really need to carefully read an assignment and I need to understand exactly what a question is asking me that way my I can be a better writer.

For my Unit 1 narrative writing, I feel like I effectively made the scenes vivid. However, upon reviewing the feedback, I became aware of multiple grammatical errors in my work. I am planning on  to fix these mistakes and resubmit a revised version. I also noticed that there were  instances where the narrative lacked sense, which was crazy to me, because as I initially reread it  everything seemed perfect, I realized that the tiredness  during the writing process lead to a loss of focus, making it challenging to identify errors. Seeing the comments made me think that i should use the method of rereading my writing outloud which will help me detect errors more easily then in my head, which i will be using for future assignments.

With the feedback and me looking back on my unit 2 annotated bibliography one thing I would do for sure is to look and research for better sources that have to do with my topic. I do feel like I could’ve did more thorough research and taken more time to find more efficient sources as well doing better on my analysis . I definitely feel like I rushed way to quick with that part of the annotated bibliography and I should’ve just took more time to explore my options and to write a more up to par analysis. Some feedback I got from my peer’s and my professor was that on 2 of my analysis’s I did sound a little repetitive which I totally agree with them on. After re reading my unit 2 the reason I sounded repetitive was because of the source quality I used . I feel as if I had chosen better sources my outcome of my unit 2 grade would have been extremely better. At the moment I thought my sources were fine and they weren’t bad at all. Therefore me seeing my sources I chose , I know I could’ve found more efficient sources and definitely word my analysis’s even better.