Category: Portfolio & Reflection (Page 3 of 5)

If I were to revise my unit 2 RAB paper, I would work on perfecting my citations and also adding some more facts in order to make my research more clear. I would incorporate more details on how I got interested in my topic and how my sources support my research. I would also focus on fixing my grammatical errors. Something I would also like to incorporate in my paper is any counter arguments that relate to my research question.

If I were to revise my RAB map I would honestly work on strengthening my conclusion. I went to the writing center and was helped with my map just to touch up some things and the person that helped me also noticed that I had a weak and rushed through conclusion.  There were also other aspects like my choice of words, I think this is a recurring problem and I’m most likely going to tweak some of those aspects once I get to revise. Another thing that came up while revising was my confusion with the reflection and rhetorical analysis, I would make these sections a little easier to comprehend since now I know how to write them out more clearly.

Considering the helpful and high feedback of the RAB (unit 2) from the professor, I would target the MLA citation format error, the missing summary, and the analysis to correct and add. With the feedback from my peers provided, I would add more context as to why I am writing this piece, making it clearer but also making it sound more relevant to the topic. As far as grammar, I would also fix those minor errors. However, I’m looking at the main areas that affected my grade.