Category: Discussions (Page 8 of 133)

For my Unit 1 narrative writing, I feel like I effectively made the scenes vivid. However, upon reviewing the feedback, I became aware of multiple grammatical errors in my work. I am planning on  to fix these mistakes and resubmit a revised version. I also noticed that there were  instances where the narrative lacked sense, which was crazy to me, because as I initially reread it  everything seemed perfect, I realized that the tiredness  during the writing process lead to a loss of focus, making it challenging to identify errors. Seeing the comments made me think that i should use the method of rereading my writing outloud which will help me detect errors more easily then in my head, which i will be using for future assignments.

With the feedback and me looking back on my unit 2 annotated bibliography one thing I would do for sure is to look and research for better sources that have to do with my topic. I do feel like I could’ve did more thorough research and taken more time to find more efficient sources as well doing better on my analysis . I definitely feel like I rushed way to quick with that part of the annotated bibliography and I should’ve just took more time to explore my options and to write a more up to par analysis. Some feedback I got from my peer’s and my professor was that on 2 of my analysis’s I did sound a little repetitive which I totally agree with them on. After re reading my unit 2 the reason I sounded repetitive was because of the source quality I used . I feel as if I had chosen better sources my outcome of my unit 2 grade would have been extremely better. At the moment I thought my sources were fine and they weren’t bad at all. Therefore me seeing my sources I chose , I know I could’ve found more efficient sources and definitely word my analysis’s even better.

For unit 1 something i feel like i need to revise was me explaining the situation of my story better. I feel like I didn’t go that much into detail and I definitely could’ve elaborated on some parts and aspects I included in my story. I also felt their was a couple of problems with the way i organized and put together the story and the way I went about it. Some feedback I got from my peer review partner’s was how i should include more emotion and to elaborate on the setting of the story . I really thought they were 100% correct on that part and I tried my best to my ability to do what was told for me to do. I did incorporate it in my story and because of that I feel like I got a higher grade then what I actually would have got if I didn’t include and take their advice .