Category: Discussions (Page 7 of 133)

Revising the unit 2 project that I re-read, had quite a few things I would change or have done differently. Cases where I think I could have explained myself better, not to say I did not, but being a bit more specific on my topic, for example:” why do I want to research my topic?” but not just giving a broad statement or response but being more specific/detailed into why I wanted to this and go more in-depth about what I would want to find out about it. I thought that I could be a bit more specific in my introduction even though it was a good introduction. I also felt like I could have reviewed the analysis grading worksheet and see what’s required to get the best grade on writing the analysis then add to it if needs be for it to be close to perfection. There were also issues with my citations which some of the references weren’t done properly in the correct format as they should be. That was all I think I need to fix in regard to my unit two project.

Reviewing the feedback for my RAB, I realized that there are a lot of areas where I fell short of the assignment’s expectations. I feel like I overlooked crucial elements of the RAB. I did not provide enough quotations. I also did not explain my topic choice and the identification of my sources. I am definitely revising my RAB and will include everything I missed. The comments on the RAB made me reflect on my writing and made me come to an awakening that I really need to carefully read an assignment and I need to understand exactly what a question is asking me that way my I can be a better writer.