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12/14

Beginning with the first week of English class thinking it would be just like any other English class. A mindset like this and approaching a college atmosphere it was a bad way to start looking into from now. Also, accepting and knowing I procrastinate a lot it made me elevate my self to do better this year forward. Our first Unit assignment was to make a personal essays based on your view on the educational system. This really intrigued me because my thoughts about school were so profound it felt like so easy to write about. Writing the essay I spoke about me skipping a grade, how school felt irrelevant to how I wanted my life to be, the good and bad expierences in high school, as well as stating school is a place for kids to go through to get to whatever they want to do in life. Writing sections of my story the feedback from my professor it made me understand how to structure my writing and grammar better. With this I took into consideration and wrote my story called Be Enlightened telling a story of who I am. When officially done with this assignment this made me feel like I went to a next level. We had peer review in class so I partnered up and got feedback from two people in my class and both said it was a good, however the same feedback from my teacher they said as well organize my work better. A line I said was “When students genuinely enjoy the learning process, they are more likely to be motivated, attend class eagerly, and activately participate making the classroom a place they want to be” with this it was intended to encourage the teachers to make school more engaging to what I wish it could for all students. Besides the Unit assignments there were reading assignments that we annotate and have a discussion about next class. These readings led to different parts of your Unit assignments. One of the stories we read was Later by James Surowiecki and this story basically about procrastination helping me understand myself better. I’ve gained insight on how to deal with procrastination and writing what I’ve learned from it that is people know what’s right and still do the thing that seems “worth doing” and with that it could lead to what needs to be done is now setting you back. This can be a cycle and still battling it I want to break this cycle.

Next is our Unit 2 assignment it was to make an Research Annotated Bibliography this was something I never did before and approaching it with creativity I felt good about it, however that’s not even the case. Thinking of a question to reasearch about left me to overthinking and when that happens I scramble in my mind causing me to stress. When talking in class about the assignment I start chatting with one of my peers asking what he feels about drugs he encourage me to go for it so I did. Now the question came quick to me due to how think of this world we in and how stubborn people can be it formulated the question Why do people take drugs knowing it’s bad for them? Knowing the audience I wanted to attain are people who are curious of taking drugs and want more information that can guide their decision to take them or not. In my conclusion, a statement that I feel is important is “I’ve learned that this world is more attentive to wrong things instead of the things that are really important”. I highlight this because as a person who is very in tune with themselves this world has a lot of distractions keeping us humans back and you wonder from what greatness with God. Completing this assignment I was confident that I did good for my first time, but that wasn’t even the case. I got a D- due to my analysis not meeting the requirements and the citations were wrong.

Last but not least Unit 3 is a project that’s based on your decision. You have to pick the genre you want to connect with your research question. And I’ve chose to do a blog for my topic which is Drugs that have an affect on people good or bad. This was a new thing for me and it let explore my creativity,  which was the best route to play. I’ve decide to make a survey and have a QR code for people to scan. The survey consist of questions getting to know each individual, which gives me data to collect what age is predominately using and why they’ve chose the drug. The blog title is Students find their Escape because my intended audience is high school and college students mostly, but can still relate to those who do drugs or curious of taking them. “So, personally, I wouldn’t recommend doing drugs because there are other things in life that can make you happy without relying on drugs for that so-called “happiness” you’re looking for”. I said this in my blog and is important because even I know drugs is just a temporary get away from own doings. However, I can’t control a person just give good advice and hope the individual reading the blog is takings drugs on their own hand.

Saying farewell to myself going through this course that made me a better writer and reader. Ms.Wang is a great teacher glad to have her as my freshman professor thank you.

10/12 first source

Fadel, Leila, and Michel Martin, hosts. “New York City Homeless Bill of Rights becomes Law.” Morning Edition, NPR, 7 June 2023, https://www.npr.org/2023/06/07/1180665241/new-york-citys-homeless-bill-of-rights-becomes-law

New York Mayor Eric Adams passed the Homeless Bill of Rights this year as a law. This bill of rights acknowledges their right to sleep outdoors in public places, but NYC does have other laws that apply limitations to this. This bill also gives people the right to apply for rental aid as well as the right to complain about the state of the shelter without receiving any reprocussions. This law was put in place because homeless people were continuously harassed when they weren’t committing anything illegal. This bill is intended as a self-advocacy tool for the homeless and can be used to sue for other laws that currently exist. For example, if they didn’t receive the interpreters they needed or weren’t able to get in contact with a housing representative, they have the ability to use this in their favor. However, Mayor Adams has recently challenged the Right to Shelter law. The Right to Shelter law has been in place for decades and requires the city to provide shelter to anyone who requests it. The mayor requested a suspension from this obligation due to the shelters becoming incredibly overburdened by thousands of asylum seekers who aimed for New York because they had heard of this law. “The advocacy group,the Coalition for the Homeless, says that as of March, there were more than 75,000 people sleeping in city shelters each night. That includes thousands of children. And recent migrants to the U.S. are also among those without stable housing.” The shelters are overwhelmed with thousands of families and children because we are not receiving sufficient funds and help from the federal government.

This podcast I found to be very informative and inputs a lot into my research. I was unaware that there were so many asylum seekers and of the right to shelter law we have. As well as the homeless bill of rights, I hadn’t come across any of this information before, so I had to do further research on all of it. I found that the right to shelter law has been established by the court since 1980. At first hearing, Mayor Adams request to suspend the Right to Shelter Act sounded unreasonable. But looking further into the state of the shelters and finding that they don’t have any more space made it more understandable. However, suspending this law would result in so many more people living on the street, not to mention the thousands of people in the shelter before the first asylum seeker arrived in NYC. The matter of funds seems to be the most constant problem and NYC needs more federal help to relieve this huge issue. 

  • “Mayor Adams allowed this bill to go into law. He didn’t veto it. But he’s also challenging New York City’s right to shelter law, which requires the city to provide shelter to anyone who requests it.”  1:38

Homework 12/14

This year coming into English 1101 I was not very confident that was going to do well. In highschool I barely gotten C sometimes and that was on a good day. So from the first day in class I decided to make sure I do my work on time and put effort into my reading and writing so I don’t fall behind. My reading and writing skills was fairly poor in the beginning. I was barely answering the questions effectively and I was use redundant words and doing run on sentences like an inexperienced writing. Around August I was not the best when it came to doing in class writing and open plan assignments. The open lab post on August 31st I wrote an response to the perusal article  Mike Bunn “How to read like a writer” and I didn’t understand it very well. For the first sentence I wrote “The text introduces Mike Bunn and his ideology that reading like a writer can help you see how the writing process is a sequence of making decisions.” This answer is not completely wrong but it’s mundane and it doesn’t capture the readers attention and get them or me thinking. Also as a reader and  I’m supposed to be in the author shoes and I’m not because i was a inept writer. Since the beginning my writing has changed. I’m more suffice with the information I am providing and my writing is more adequate for my readers to read. In unit one In September I had a lot of fun writing and my writing started to get  significantly better. I wrote about my experiences in quarantine because it made who I was as a person and a student. I had some assumptions about myself and my writing through especially in unit one. I thought my writing wasn’t college level work because of the vocabulary I was using but I think differently now and I believe that it has gotten better since unit one.  Also my work never use to flow properly, everything was all over the place. My classmate jade gave me peer feedback saying that my work has different points and it’s now flowing and it stood out to me because I was unconsciously doing that in the past, wring and jumping ti different points. I have learned now to let my work flow like a River and now have them in puddles because the water is there it just needs to flow.

Around October is when things started to get more harder and challenging because we were entering unit 2 and in my opinion the hardest unit out of all three. I was given the option to choose any topic and write about it. I choose slavery because I’m African American and it resonated with me but I quickly dropped out because it wasn’t modern and it was a very controversial topic. I ended up doing Foster care because that was more interesting to me and my classmate Gabby gave me the idea for the topic as well. I did the work but it ended up being wrong. The citation were wrong and the summary and Analysis was wrong too so I had to make revisions. The introduction and conclusion was strong so my writing gotten better on that half. For my conclusion I said “The people that need to know about the rates in mental illness in children is the people that have the sufficient and necessary funding to support the children and the people looking to adopt or foster a child”. There sentence was very strong and specific to what I was talking about in my research. There was a lesson that stuck with me when doing this assignment and thst was of you are going to do something do it one hundred percent all the way.

In the month of November and December I worked on unit 3 and I thought it was going to be easy but I made many mistakes along the way. I did the assignment wrong and I am now redoing it over. I originally did an opinion article but I found that to be difficult since I got an F on it so now I’m doing a pamphlet  there telling parents five things you need to know when fostering a child with mental health issues. This way is more fun because it’s easier for me and the person reading it because they get more out of it than what i did last time and I did an artist statement but got a bad grade on that too so that’s getting redone. Overall this class was amazing and I learned a lot of valuable information and lessons. My favorite unit from the semester is unit 2 because I had to put in the most work for that project and the outcome was shown. As I said to myself in the beginning of the semester “My goal is to get an A in this class” I worked towards it to achieve it and put in the work so it can pay off. Also I can take what I learned and use it in the real world like the chatgpt lesson when to use and and not to use it. I had many take away from this class and i will use it to better myself in the future.

 

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