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I already made revisions

My approach to revising my unit 2 annotated bibliography would be to seriously go back and look at the grading rubric that was used in grading my annotated bibliography and start there. Hence, the feedback received back from Professor Annie I would revise my citations through helpful sources such as purdue owl to ensure my citations are correct. From the feedback, I also need to work on my rhetorical analysis as well as the summary of each source. The feedback from my colleagues that I will also apply to my revision is the amount of detail and grammatical errors that can be found within my writing. There is indeed a great amount of revision needed to be done to my writing piece along with word counts for some paragraphs. Overall, I would reference back from the revision suggestions from Professor Annie and work my way from there as well as adding the writing necessary to achieve a more successful annotated bibliography.

With the opportunity of revising the Unit 2 RAB, I plan on focusing on my  summary and analysis. Based off of the feedback I received from my colleagues and professor my paper was knowledgeable but I lacked on the reflective aspect of my bibliography. I primarily targeted the information from my research that I wanted to provide and lost focus for my annotations. For my analysis I plan on making it more clear on what type of source I was using and overall making it more explicit on how it impacts my question.