Considering the helpful and high feedback of the RAB (unit 2) from the professor, I would target the MLA citation format error, the missing summary, and the analysis to correct and add. With the feedback from my peers provided, I would add more context as to why I am writing this piece, making it clearer but also making it sound more relevant to the topic. As far as grammar, I would also fix those minor errors. However, I’m looking at the main areas that affected my grade.