For my Unit 1 narrative writing, I feel like I effectively made the scenes vivid. However, upon reviewing the feedback, I became aware of multiple grammatical errors in my work. I am planning on  to fix these mistakes and resubmit a revised version. I also noticed that there were  instances where the narrative lacked sense, which was crazy to me, because as I initially reread it  everything seemed perfect, I realized that the tiredness  during the writing process lead to a loss of focus, making it challenging to identify errors. Seeing the comments made me think that i should use the method of rereading my writing outloud which will help me detect errors more easily then in my head, which i will be using for future assignments.