If I were to revise my RAB map I would honestly work on strengthening my conclusion. I went to the writing center and was helped with my map just to touch up some things and the person that helped me also noticed that I had a weak and rushed through conclusion. There were also other aspects like my choice of words, I think this is a recurring problem and I’m most likely going to tweak some of those aspects once I get to revise. Another thing that came up while revising was my confusion with the reflection and rhetorical analysis, I would make these sections a little easier to comprehend since now I know how to write them out more clearly.
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Professor: Annie Wang
Email: annie.wang52@citytech.cuny.edu
Course Location: Namm N-618
Course meeting times:
TuTh 4:05 – 5:45 PM
Weekly office hour:
Th 5:45 – 6:45 PM (Namm N-618),
or by appointment
A course in effective essay writing and basic research techniques including use of the library. Demanding readings assigned for classroom discussion and as a basis for essay writing.
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