When I decided to revise my unit 1 writing some of the things I kept in mind where the key points in the assignment. Reaching out to the intended audience and being able to relate to them in that manner as well as making the writing interesting for the audience to read and learn. There were also a several amount of grammatical errors and a few run on sentences that I was able to pick up on and some of which were pointed out by professor Annie. Thanks to her I was able to find the other mistakes and carefully fixed them and inclusively reread the sentences to make sure it was grammatically correct. I also found it very helpful to read over my writing again thoroughly to catch any mistakes and to overall just make sure it was ready to finally re-submit for a chance of a higher grade.