If I had the time to revise unit 1, something that I would do is to add more details to my story and to check my grammar. I would also revise my conclusion. Something that my classmates mentioned was to create more contrast in my story line. It would’ve been better if I mentioned why some classes were not as good as the one I was writing about and how it affected me.  Also, I should be less repetitive in my writing so that the reader doesn’t get bored. I would incorporate these things so that my paper is more put together and more clear in what I am trying to say.