In unit one I made simple mistakes but they affected my writing in very different ways my grammar could of been better my use of the words and periods could of been used a lot more and the structure of my writing could have been a lot  better as I revise my unit 1 assignment I compare it to my assignments and projects I’ve done recently I can see the change and the progression between the two the best way for me to fix this would be to form a new way of understanding writing structures to help me best fit my style of writing and a way of revising my work in a story for the reader to better understand I got a great grade but I know that there’s always room for improvement especially in a area such as writing there’s more ways than one that will help me grow furthermore now that I’ve been able to learn from the recent lectures I now know the proper ways to enhance my writing to get a better grade