For my Unit 1 paper, I would go back and revise the transitions. I like how I wrote my paper, as I feel it became a full circle moment from introduction to conclusion. However from the feedback I received from my classmates and professor, the transitions between paragraphs were abrupt and I agree. The transitions were rushed and were not smooth and it definitely needs more time and work. I struggle finding the right words and tend to take a long time when writing because of this, so this is certainly something I will work on.