For Unit 1 I would like to revise my lack of detail in some of the aspects of my writing. I feel as though I rushed through some of the key details that led to my conclusion.  My professor and colleagues both mentioned the part of my COVID experience lacking detail and I would agree but I also feel as though it would take away from my main point. I would like to come to a compromise somehow and include enough details about that event that occurred during my educational journey but also not too many that distract from my main point. I also would like to revise the ending of my narrative because it also seemed rushed and like it didn’t have a proper ending and it seemed like I just wanted to get the writing over with. Besides that, I feel like I can also fix up some of my vocabulary and word choices to make it a little easier and smooth to read through.