Feston Joseph Explication Draft

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1. 

   Alexis

   April 17, 2020 at 2:28 am

   Peer Review Questions:

   1–Is the title of the poem and full author’s name provided in the first or second sentence? Be specific if something is missing.

   Yes.

   2–Does the student provide the two lines he or she will explicate?

   Yes.

   3–What poetry terms does the student examine?

   Feston, you do not mention the poetic terms you will be examining but, from reading you explication essay it seems that you are examining symbolism, denotation, connotation, tone/mood, allusion and diction.

   4–Copy and paste your two favorite sentences from the students essay. Then explain why you like them. (example: not only is this an example of the college sentence, this sentence highlights an important poetry term (metaphor) in a very clear way–I get it completely)

   One line that emphasizes this is “Two roads diverge in a yellow wood”This shows that there are two choices that are laid out before him an this shows that there is a feeling of confusion.This shows that no matter where people go on their journey in life they always have choices and it is up to the individual to make the decision that is fitting to them.

   I liked how you described the type of mood that the livened creates as a whole in the poem and what effect it creates.

   5–Copy and paste two sentences that are confusing. Then explain what is confusing about them. (example: you may have mixed up the terms alliteration and assonance, please check to make sure you have the right term for repeated vowel sounds)

   In the line the phrase “the difference could be for good or bad and there could have been a positive change or negative change.The narrator does not explain what occurred between the time he took the path to where he is at now but he does show that there was a difference.This alludes to the point that any choice that you make could benefit you or harm you and it is your choice and what you do from that point forward that makes your future and the other choices you make as well.

   I think you may have mixed up the term allusion with symbolism, as you explain what the choices that the speaker made in your poem mean.

   6–Make two concrete suggestions. (example: expand the range of connotations rather than name one connotation; example: instead of using the verb “like” three time in the first paragraph, consider different varying the idea by using “love” or “can relate to”; example: when you revise this, change the lower case “i” to “I”–Prof. Scanlan will definitely say something about that.)

   You should mention what poetic terms you will be talking about and expand on the connotations of your word. Also, when you revise this, you should add punctuation marks.

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2. 

   Humaiya

   April 18, 2020 at 6:56 pm

   1–Is the title of the poem and full author’s name provided in the first or second sentence? Be specific if something is missing.

   -Yes.

   2–Does the student provide the two lines he or she will explicate?

   -Yes.

   3–What poetry terms does the student examine?
   – It does not seem any is mentioned

   4–Copy and paste your two favorite sentences from the students essay. Then explain why you like them. (example: not only is this an example of the college sentence, this sentence highlights an important poetry term (metaphor) in a very clear way–I get it completely)

   – “This shows that no matter where people go on their journey in life they always have choices and it is up to the individual to make the decision that is fitting to them.The “two roads” show that there are two directions in which one could lead to a pleasurable outcome and the other path could lead to something bad.” I really enjoyed this meaning of the lines. It is very detailed.

   5–Copy and paste two sentences that are confusing. Then explain what is confusing about them. (example: you may have mixed up the terms alliteration and assonance, please check to make sure you have the right term for repeated vowel sounds)

   – “This shows that when the author chose a road he implies that he went down a path that he didn’t explain and there is only room for us to assume how he felt about the path he took.” I don’t understand what you are trying to say here. Maybe be a little more specific.

   6–Make two concrete suggestions. (example: expand the range of connotations rather than name one connotation; example: instead of using the verb “like” three time in the first paragraph, consider different varying the idea by using “love” or “can relate to”; example: when you revise this, change the lower case “i” to “I”–Prof. Scanlan will definitely say something about that.)

   – Make sure to mention all the poetry terms that were used and also be more specific about what I said. Your explanation was very detailed. Good Job!

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