I really enjoyed this love story between Anna Patchett and Lucy Grealy had in the story. Also really shocked at end of the story because of the relationship she had with strangers at the bar. It just I didn’t like the last part because of the bar guy, it just messed it up. I think that part was too detailed and wasn’t necessary to talk about, the whole story was too dealing. other than that I liked the story about how friendships can contain more passion and affection than any in the romantic kingdom. My question is that If the story was too detailed why the writer didn’t emphasize herself that much in the story?