Prof. Jessica Penner | OL20 | Fall 2021

Liam Escamilla, Dialogue 1

Aaliyah: Yoo I just came out of school.

Josh: Um, did you tell your counselor about the programs that we spoked about yesterday?

Aaliyah: Omg yes I did josh (Rolls eyes) and she said to come tomorrow because she was busy today.

Josh: Hmm, yeah right. You coming home though?

Aaliyah: No. I’m going to meet my friends right now.

Josh: Uh what? Mom said to come home.

(10 minutes later with no response)

Josh: Wya? mom is worried about you.

Aaliyah: I told you I was going to see my friends. I’m at the park with her.

Josh: Bruh, mom is going to get mad but okay whatever.

Aaliyah: Tell her I’ll be home by 6pm, geez.

Josh: Lol okay, be safe.

1 Comment

  1. Kevin Perea

    Pretty straightforward convo. This gives like older brother trying to wrangle the younger sibling vibes. It’s written well enough to feel tension but also enough vagueness to feel a sense of mystery.

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