Yaire Castillo

2 November 2020

ENG1121

Word Count:209

Honestly, I didn’t like my conclusion for my annotated bibliography, I just feel like I could’ve done better and expanded my thoughts right there and then. The discourse community that would benefit from my research is immigrant women. They are the ones who inspired me to go through with this research. I wanted to focus on how women were treated in immigration detention centers without the slightest chance of ever speaking up for themselves. I educated myself on this specific research topic and realized that all I could do is inform others. Open their eyes and have them read what I had to say in order to spread awareness of what immigrant women are going through in these detention centers. I don’t think they know a lot about the subject. Some expectations they might have is that policies for women in detention centers change. They might have some concerns about how women who have been affected are doing now. This discourse community can benefit from this information by educating themselves of their rights. How they need to speak up about their exerineces, advocating for themselves. The best method for reaching my community is to make a site in which they feel comfortable enough to speak upon their past experiences.