Before I was not yours and clearly
your ahead of some temporarily, corrupt all and any soul owned
with disallowance, all and any soul unbothered will,
struggle –
Awful abyss closed rejected publicly outside of any politeness
Politeness without any betrayal outside of discouragement
Betrayal without any hinder outside of my face: hatred, large
entity they deceased.
Smiling at such light above you
I chose to rewrite the same poem. It’s very interesting to see how you chose to word it. Funny we chose the same title.
Sammy, I really like “rejected publicly outside of any politeness”, as well as, “Smiling at such light above you”. Very beautiful polarizing statements.