Rob Ostrom | OL02 | Fall 2021
As warmth beams through your eyes
Our bodies intertwine simultaneously, it feels like eternity
us two, me and you,
uninterruptedā
A garden filled with sunflowers that tickles your feet
Feels like my fingers dancing on
your neck and down to your back: euphorically, letās
let our love
bloom as daylight coats us whole.
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This is so beautiful! The message, the wording, and your personal touch on it and writing honestly.
Anahi, this is really stunning!!! To me, it is the most completed poem out of all the ones posted. It really reads like a love poem, I could easily see this being a poem at a wedding or the poem that would make me fall in love with someone!